You Write Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

You Write

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You have heart and feelings
To write more about being
Human on earth with all that you care
And prove what really you are!

The poetry is not dry subject
It is associated with your acts
Whether right or wrong
It makes you to sing a song

That can be of joy or sadness
About some incidence of happiness
Some lovely encounter with heart
And lovely belonging as an art

No one may look at even if you are beautiful
No one may appreciate unless you are successful
The world is so ruthless to follow
Just do not be carried away or allow

Why does cuckoo sing?
Why does she bring?
Good melody before the advent of sun
It is all for us and not for fun

Think of beautiful nature
That shall guide you for sure
Take you to unknown secret
You write down and make others let

Tuesday, May 27, 2014
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Feeling the Nature around Bhuwan Joshi20 hours ago Definitely a nice pointer to those of us who have no time to stand and stare the gifts of Nature...... Comment +1

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Good but could be better Arsi Anon20 hours ago It sounds incomplete. You should revise the ending. Also, you have a few grammar mistakes. But the idea is there and it is strong. It's a pretty creative idea, I guess, writing about writing. I like it, but you could improve it. :)

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Like 20 hours ago by universal Thaumaturgy | Reply

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You have heart and feelings To write more about being

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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