You're A Spoiler, O Rains Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

You're A Spoiler, O Rains

Rating: 4.8


Yonder, not much shows
Save rains lashing at windows,
And my mind there goes
Drenched to core in thoughts of her
Telling rains raining no more,
Rains, you're a spoiler.
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Musings |29.03.2020|
Topic: rains

Friday, March 27, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: rains
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Why is the rain that has stopped raining is called a spoiler? Put on a cap of imagination.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aniruddha Pathak 12 April 2020

Unwritten Soul, A lovely quatrain and interesting no less, thanks

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Khairul Ahsan 11 April 2020

I love rains, when I do not have to go out for a living. I too love to be drenched to the core, in fanciful thoughts. Being beside a beloved on a rainy day is a double bliss.

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Aniruddha Pathak 12 April 2020

Of course dear poet, I am with you.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 27 March 2020

When I was a child, rain always amazed me especially the rythym that it creates. The strong downpour allowed me to imagine and dream wonderful things. Loved the rains lashing at windows... Amazing write with superb imagery. Onto my Poem List.

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Aniruddha Pathak 27 March 2020

Yes indeed, rain is a magician, for the child perhaps more so, but even to an aging soul. When I was in Madras (24 years of my life) I loved its two monsoons. Of course in Ooty (a hill station, three months) where it would rain almost daily and sun would be hardly seen, it became a bit of a sore latter on. Thanks for this wonderful feedback.

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Mahtab Bangalee 27 March 2020

Death procession Death hill the earth Tears is dried by shocked Now the rain with the pandemic Invites the death angel forevermore..! ! !

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Aniruddha Pathak 27 March 2020

I love these variety of takes on a poem, thanks for visiting

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Aniruddha Pathak 27 March 2020

You are dear poet on a via line, where I had not intended to go. But your logic is faultless. Yes, there are times when rains are not welcome.

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Unwritten Soul 27 March 2020

When the tears stop falling, but crying still undone When feeling is rushing but mind refuse the harm The rain is the same but the muse is the rain Spoiler is like this when my 10 words left....(undone)

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Aniruddha Pathak 12 April 2020

Lovely, dear Unwritten Soul, an interesting quatrain.

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