I'm angry
I; m fuming inside
My anger overspills
I was expecting you to tell me
How muc you've missed me
after the whole week you were
away from me, but all you said
was 'hi'
I can't find rest
My heart keeps on tossing
I'm at rage
My feelings are raging at you
You have been away for the whole
week away from me, all you asked me
was 'how are you doing? '
How do you expect me to be fine? I doubt
I am fine
I've spent nights without knowing
on whether you have eaten or had some
clothes on or a shelter to put your head under
I'm not at ease inside
But now that I've seen you
I guess I'm fine!
oh, i forgot to say............. you have some typos. i think sometimes PH actually changes a poem a bit when a poet submits it, though rarely. so it may be PH's fault, but it is perhaps your fault for not proofreading enough times. once in a great while i let one of my typos get through. oops! ! bri :) nice rhyming
oh, i forgot to say............. you have some typos. i think sometimes PH actually changes a poem a bit when a poet submits it, though rarely. so it may be PH's fault, but it is perhaps your fault for not proofreading enough times. once in a great while i let one of my typos get through. oops! ! bri :)
a very nice/interesting/surprising ending! i was first drawn to the photo; i don't recall seeing a swimming pool photo on PH before! then i was drawn to this title, as i fancy myself to be something of a comic. i MUST BE; people are always laughing at me! ! my favorite lines: You have been away for the whole week away from me, all you asked me was 'how are you doing? ' i'll send this to MyPoemList. :) bri
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
OOPS! now i said it twice. ;)