You Know I Know Poem by Benjamin Paa Willie
You Know I Know
You know I know
And…
I know you know I know
So I've ceased pretending
Cease pretending I don't
You know I care
And…
I know you know I care
So I shall cease faking
Cease faking I don't care
You know I dream
And…
I know you know I dream
So I shall cease dreaming
Cease dreaming I don't dream
You know I love
And…
I know you know I love
So I shall find courage
Find courage to say I do
But
I know not your heart
And…
You know I know not your heart
So cease hiding
Cease hiding your heart from me
Yet
If there is something in there
A stain you don't want me to find
Then I shall rest searching
And love you blindly
For I care; I dream of your love
And I won't live another day
In denial of us
So cease hiding
Cease hiding
Your heart from me
That was a good idea and revealing all by twisting the 'mind clouds' among each other, i think you are ready to move on from your bad times, and hope you both have good time to heal hidden sores inside...all the best and i want to say, you done it very creatively, crafting this poem very well..it's nice..keep writing Ben, i thought you can create more poem and even better..thanks for inviting-Unwritten Soul
A very nice poem, the only suggestion I could make would be on the 4th line in the first stanza, the grammer could be I cease or I've ceased Keep writing and expressing your thoughts - the world is better for it. You might enjoy my latest poem Down on the Bayou?
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I would like to translate this poem
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4/24/2024 10:56:43 PM # 1.0.0.1119
Exclusively, i like the style of ur writing. a good poem