The sun is smiling as I open my eyes
Birds serenading the awoken sky.
I watch from my window the sun climbing a hill
Spreading its glimmer so beautiful.
Trees catch the amber and red glow
Rising sun embracing me with love she bestows.
Caresses the clouds with her pink gleams
And sees her reflection in the crystal blue stream.
I look up at the cerulean sky
I feel God deposit heaven in my eyes.
This view is that of celestial
Giving a blessing upon the terrestrial.
She gives me hope to conquer my day
Free my problems and take my sorrows away.
She quenches my soul with kind bliss
And injects myself with tenderness.
My dear girl you have me in a paradise
My dear beauty you have me mesmerised
Because you are my lovely sun rise.
I love you.
If I heard those exact words from a guy I like, I would be his forever. Such beautiful words used in this writing. :)
Vividly imaginative in a simple, yet mildly complex way. I love it.
HELLO MR WILLIAMS....... i guess we share the rhythm in our poems....... you are on the right path...... you need no teacher keep reading other poets works and you automatically adjust your style....... i love this
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
this is vey good, i really like it. x