Aftab Alam

Gold Star - 39,822 Points (15 th April 1967 / , , RANCHI,)

You And Me - Poem by Aftab Alam

You and me
Let us be kids
Run behind the butterfly
Like free air,

No feeling
Whether male or female
No touch sensation
No lust
kiddy's love
An angel
Nature’s slave
Let us be Water
Sing as brook sings
A free flow,
A heifer leap on meadows
Heaven's home without roof
Without any windows

Fight and forget
Mirth is worth
Let us laugh like flower
Away from worries
Have a heifer run, on the meadows
And queen on the bed
Through quilt of hug and embarrass
Light the candle of love
Through your breath hot
And with trembling petals
Drop, dew through the cusp

Let us come and be one
You and me
A symbol of unity
Transparent; like a soul
Unseen from the Body
Away from the world
Silently, silently
A souls silence


Comments about You And Me by Aftab Alam

  • Rookie - 226 Points Tristan Love-day (10/25/2013 1:46:00 PM)

    : O *votes* keep it up-you, my friend have a talent :) (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - -2 Points Ibnu Din Assingkiri (10/22/2013 10:09:00 PM)

    it's a wow! 10. grown-ups full of hatred, lets be kids forever. :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 460 Points marvin brato (10/21/2013 3:43:00 AM)

    Truly amazing sentiments, poetic and profound! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,101 Points Heather Wilkins (10/20/2013 11:19:00 AM)

    your last stanza so lovely and pure. Getting away from the world such a lovely thought. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, October 12, 2013

Poem Edited: Thursday, November 21, 2013


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