Yell Poem by Tiffany ThePirate

Yell

Rating: 4.4


When you yell at me
can't you see?
Your only making it worse
Your making me hate you more easily

I understan
I screw things up
Im only human.
You need to see
You yelling
Its killing me

Stop it! !
Give it a break! !
There's only so much
This girl can take

I'm sick of this
If i could i would run away
Your making it hard
To face a new day

Just stop yelling
I get the point dad
Now stop yelling
your making me mad.

12-2-09

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joseph Stotz 05 December 2009

comment me back so I remember wher I rhyme slow where did my mind go I threw where I lost woah..... I had to lose first I am sorry I play no games either jack a sparrow you have found that there is no beef with halk now.... no pirate look how I write not posting all of this but for you go ahead and do it

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Joseph Stotz 05 December 2009

I hated the yelling over time I got over it.... Nope i shut myself out from society my self and lost all my friends. All I know is remembering through this so-called tragedy of my own personal life. Is that there is no other issue then our family relations.... forgive them who yell at you, and let them deal with me

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Catrina Heart 06 December 2009

well expressed thoughts and feelings...niceli done dear! ! !

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Angel OfGod 06 December 2009

People express their emotions in many different forms.....some yell and some use vices to deal with what bothers them. I'm glad to see that you write.

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Eyan Desir 06 December 2009

You should show him this poem maybe lol.. Well when you are small you are small just be strong one day... no one will yell at you

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Carol Gall 05 December 2009

not a clue about the other comments ok tiffany yelling is a hatefu thing to do to anyone i know how you feel i used to imagine putting duct tape on those mouths just be with yourself 10

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John Knight 05 December 2009

Hi Tiffany - Who's yellin' at a nice girl like you Angel - it's sure not me - I love you! You seem to be going through a phase were you are letting all your angst out and getting back on a higher plane. This is my third of you mega poems i have commented on and I have ut you at the top of my Prayer List - AMEN. Things always get better as you get older (I should know) keep lookig up and lokng forward. Keep on writing it gives us a glimpse into the theings that bug you and we can share them with the LORD on your behalf - OK. Again i have scored a TEN parceque j'aime POESIE DU COUER je't'aime. Love you in poetry JOHN.

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