Goodbye 2 Poem by Tiffany ThePirate

Goodbye 2

Rating: 5.0


I figured it out
I know what i've done
I said i hated you
and now its me whose shunned

Please understand
I don't, at all
When i said that
my mind was awall

I've said sorry
and im trying here
i love you guys
I need you here

I can't blame you
only me
I let my depression
get the best of me

I hurt your feeling
I understand
Maybe in time
We can make amends

11-29-09

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joseph Stotz 05 December 2009

nope stop don't dropp you will get up now look into my poetry I deleted them too now stand back Ice i glisten has a brand new bag of vision call me your optimist optometrist- with a dash of a pen you might heal yourself again

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Allan O 05 December 2009

very well written again..sounds like a closing to the first goodbye...a final request....loved it thanks again.. ~^..^

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Catrina Heart 06 December 2009

wow another touching written piece...lovely! ! !

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Angel OfGod 06 December 2009

The great thing I have learned about true friendship is that one will except the others short combings and move on. A friend told me once 'Feel what the f*ck you have to feel and then lets be friends again.' I learned a lot from that one sentence. Keep writing about what you feel and let others work out their own feelings.

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Eyan Desir 06 December 2009

Well expressed again....10s

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Carol Gall 05 December 2009

tiffany things happen and if it gets the better of you not your fault stay and write 10

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John Knight 05 December 2009

Hi Tiffany - Don't worry Angel we all forgive you because we all love you. Always nice to say sorry for that i give you a TEN. Keep writing and keep reading all of our Poems. Often we guys say really really lovely things about the PH Ladies - you are all awesome. Love you in poetry - JOHN

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