Goodbye Poem by Tiffany ThePirate

Goodbye

Rating: 5.0


You read my message
You don't reply
What have i done?
Can you tell me why?

I know your busy
but you make time
for the rest
I am nothing..at best

Am i a bother?
Should i leave?
Just say one word
I can take it
I already see..

Just say 'Goodbye'
And i'll be gone
There would be no reason
to carry on

I won't stay where im not wanted
i just need to know
When you read my message
and don't reply
Is that because your saying goodbye?


11-28-09

**Sorry haven't posted poems in forever.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Allan O 05 December 2009

very well written and the way you make a request sound so powtic is magic....thank you Tiffany ~^..^

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Catrina Heart 06 December 2009

Nice poem shared...expressive one! ! !

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Eyan Desir 06 December 2009

Awwww...Be Tiffany good write

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Jerry Hughes 05 December 2009

Well written Tiff, if a bit self-indulgent. Fondly, Jerry

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Carol Gall 05 December 2009

a request needs the answer feel frustration in your words 10

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John Knight 05 December 2009

Hi Tiffany - You wrote and so i am replying. We all feel sometimes like you do in your fiesty poem - I can see why they call you the Pirate. But I love you Angel - I have read your poem - I have commented and I have scored (TEN - because you are worth it!)) - what more can I do? Love you in poetry - JOHN

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