World Has Moved Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

World Has Moved

Rating: 3.7


World has moved
Tuesday,9th April 2019

I searched for friendship sincerely
with the hope to meet immediately
the desire that was laid within
but apparently not seen

Why one should have a friendship?
just to make chat and keep,
the sensation on!
or with the fancy to be flown

females friends are a little hesitant
they won't open up instant
but wait and watch the movement
and then come close to pass any comment

I have admired these qualities
and watched it from the angle of humanity
it is their hidden anxiety
that keeps them always shy

the world has moved very fast
we need to trust
and observe the behavior
that shall definitely give understanding and honor

Hasmukh Mehta

World Has Moved
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Honest Critic 10 April 2019

Why do all you hypocrites keep praising poems that are not very good? This guy can't even speak English, and his poems are marginal. He also must have a connection with the people who run this website. How else does he post a poem one day and the very next day it is MPOD? When one of my poems was chosen, PH notified me a month in advance that it would be chosen!

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I post 10 poem a day

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Observer. 10 April 2019

So totally right is the above honest critic

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Honest Critic 10 April 2019

You just proved my point, Mehta. You have no command of English. You should have said I post 10 POEMS per day. Yes, you post 10 poems per day, and not one of them makes any sense!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 10 April 2019

CONGRATULATIONS, dear Hasmukh, Fascinating Title THE WORLD HAS MOVED, absolutely. Brilliantly penned and thought, a well deserved Member Poem Of The Day, Hurray! A 10 Vote.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 11 April 2019

welcome Rajashree Mohapatra 116 mutual friends Message

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 11 April 2019

Jenn Long 14 mutual friends Message

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 11 April 2019

welcome Williamsji Maveli 456 mutual friends Message

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 11 April 2019

welcome Sania Zakir 7 mutual friends

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 11 April 2019

Ariadne Sawyer 132 mutual friends 1 Edit or delete this Like · Reply · 1m

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