World Poem by jennie o'brien

World

Rating: 3.5


We don't really question the world,
But the world has a lot to answer for.
It may be a perfect place for some,
But for others, they need more.
It can be a place of pain and sorrow,
Where wars are fought and 'need' to be won.

But whats it all about?

So we wait -
What for, Im not sure,
For me, I wait for it to be a better place.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Spencer 24 February 2006

thease are great words Jenny/but somewhere in your life you will find a better place/ there's always a place for someone, I have written a poem called Happy Endings' if you get time read it/ this is agreat poem. cheers Sylvie

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Sam Kelly 22 February 2006

I wonder how long it will take :) xxx

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