I Need Poem by jennie o'brien

I Need



All I need
Is for you to care
And I need
You to be there
And tell them
Not to point and stare.
But,
You can't do that.
Can you?
I really dont understand you.

Do you?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sam Kelly 21 February 2006

actually, this is my favourite. its got a nicely dynamic flow that compliments the length. nice composition... you are a good girl. x

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