Wood Smoke & Sawdust Poem by Tj Murray

Wood Smoke & Sawdust

Rating: 5.0


His voice was like wood smoke & sawdust
As he comforted, crying over made up scenarios of a world without him
"I'll never die Tee-bee Jay-bee... I'm superman"
His voice convinced me he was immortal
A voice of wood smoke and sawdust
Cancer changed that voice to just smoke and dust
Now hardly audible over the buzz of an oxygen machine
But hes still here
He's still my superman

Wood Smoke & Sawdust
Friday, June 21, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: cancer,childhood ,grandparents
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I was raised by my grandparents, my grandpa being my father figure. We grew up in a small trailer in the middle of the woods, and I spent my entire childhood helping him cut wood for the wood burner. I remember the smells the most. I always remember him with a beer in his hand and a cigarette in the other. He was checked out by a doctor and they found traces of cancer in his throat, but soon after my grandmother was diagnosed with stage 4 and he completely ignored his own to focus on her. After she passed, his got worse, and they ended up taking his vocal chords to take the cancer. He's now 100% cancer free, but it came at a cost.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 28 June 2019

Cancer changed that voice to just smoke and dust Now hardly audible over the buzz of an oxygen machine But hes still here He's still my superman.. life's situations make us realize so many of what we plan and think and love are not in our hands. Turn to God. God will comfort you my dear poet. tony

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