Wondering Poem by Liliana EL.

Wondering

Rating: 5.0


At a time I was sure
So sure of my passions, desires, feelings
Fantasized
Sure to imagine gracious, beautiful moments with you alongside

Sometimes so many faces
Names, appearances, attractions

But my mind and heart would return to you

Now, a time
where people do not come with strong meaning

Stunning photos, blissful scenes
With who, though, shall they be?
So many names and people and potential
But without a passion, meaning, connection,
they may as well not be here

Saying that, I do not wish lovely fractions gone
I just hope for a presence, clear and strong

Time again
Passing nights
Dreaming on

Once, all you
A dilly-dally, now
Dabs in ponds
Ripples going, then gone

When is the time in which I'll be come over with such assurance to leap, dive, and submerge myself in sweet, refreshing, summer breath, ocean, heat, and breeze?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vlad Mutuleanu 05 February 2014

Such an interesting and troubled poem! Amazing!

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Lyn Paul 04 February 2014

Wonderful Words Liliana, set so beautifully with the pauses. Thank you

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