Without You Poem by sagar patil.

The pang of separation, the tune of nothingness, the sense of loss everything is written with tear.Nice one Sagar.

Outburst of your now sadden heart excellently inked! write that clearly shows your great feeling and emotions! I know the feeling of separation for I have been through painful situation many times and gladly survived! Sometimes things happen for a reason and must live with that fact of life! Like I said in my poem titled: In The Pursuit of Happiness Änd when I thought I had a great loss, it turned out to be a blessing from the sky I, still have not been over a heartbreak I suffered three years ago but I must move forward until I find the right one! 10+++ This sad but powerful and well crafted write clearly shows your love and talent! Keep it up my friend, you have plenty to offer to the Poetry World! God Bless You! Romeo-New York City

Nice poem with color of gray, gray of sorrow and bursting feeling..you burst it all in your paper.keep it up, thanks for sharing with us_Soul

Absolutely beautiful, sad but beautiful all the same. You did a very good job, thank you for writing this! ! Cheers :)

beautiful writing style. i loved reading it

A soul stirring piece of poetry Sagar, It really touched my heart and made me shiver. A good write

wow...It's just as if I'm the one saying these words cos there's someone am missing...nice poem

Beautiful and emotional i love it :)

sometimes it happens so in life. but i like to remind you the words of bachchan jee in one of his poem. jo beet gayee so baat gayee. but it is not so easy to forget those moments of life. you have expressed with your inner heart.

Very nice bhai. Loved the keen desire for a departing soul.You are still staying, in her memory.