RoseAnn V. Shawiak

Gold Star - 18,117 Points (October 6,1950 / New Jersey)

Withdrawal - Poem by RoseAnn V. Shawiak

Where arrows walk down silent pathways in the forest,
deepest withdrawal stirs in moments of despair.

Empty, totally stepping in mires of sorrow, like mud
covering your shoes.

Looking about, seeing trees thickly grown together,
no way out until you are upon them.

Forever taking handfuls of stones, leaving trails
behind, hoping to be found.

Life stretches, pulls itself apart, folds in upon
itself and hides.

Hides beneath the coverlet of suicide.


Poet's Notes about The Poem

Thinking of suicide is a normal thought, it fits in nicely with poetry of grief, although it's never acted upon, except in words.

Comments about Withdrawal by RoseAnn V. Shawiak

  • Gold Star - 31,578 Points Gajanan Mishra (3/18/2014 12:44:00 PM)

    moments of despair, I like it, thanks.
    Please read my poems and comment. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, March 18, 2014

Poem Edited: Wednesday, March 19, 2014


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