With No Vision Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

With No Vision

Rating: 5.0


I hold you near
Just to support you dear
Keep in mind as such no fear
Just trust your own ears

Watch with own vision
Keep nothing in mind with confusion
It may be related
But sometimes unrelated

That makes you feeble
Lands you in trouble
Unable to take decision
Think about it with precision

You need not rush to the corner
There is also no need to push it for later
Have your own course for future
I can, on my part, certainly assure

Life is certainly worth and precious
It has to be kept on and continuous
Let there be no other thought
As we have resisted and fought

Today we are on platform
Where we need to be better informed
Life must relate and come to the point
We need be one and certainly a permanent joint

I shall leave no stone unturned
You may certain be back in fold and returned
You are and will ever remain so
How hall allow you to go?

I have determination to hold
Face it bravely as bold
You may certainly look forward
This is my final word

Come and join me in my drive
You may certainly survive
Take me along and make it easy
We are one entity and be not be so choosey

I shall hold you hand in hand
As if to remain together as friend
It shall be our right endeavor
To walk along with pride and honor

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 12 September 2012

1st 5 star I've given out ever. Giovanni Barricelli1 minute ago I'm so pleased by the creativity, the ability for me to not only understand what you wrote, but where it was heading. Kept the format & rules, and still had an enjoyable poem to read. Thank you for sharing. Giovanni Comment 0 Deep Donna Ohm2 minutes ago I liked reading this poem. It reminds me of relationships in good and bad times. Comment 0 I like it

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 12 September 2012

Armando WmLess than a minute ago To be honest if i wasnt so sleepy i would have loved it but go work bro keep on writing

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 12 September 2012

I hold you near Just to support you dear

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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