Whispeing Love Poem by ROOP REKHA BHASKAR

Whispeing Love

Rating: 4.0


Whispering Love
Did the sweet nothings mean naught to you?
I waited un-satiated, infatuated - by the gate.
I cried unending tears, and breathless race up the mountain top
To see, if I could glimpse your tall shadow,
O’er the horizon.

Whispering Love
Did the sweet kisses linger to wet your hungry lips?
Just to quench your thirst?
I’m left searching for your fingers tangled in my hair,
To trace and cool the burns
You left on my half opened lips.
I sprint to the waterfall and rinse my face,
To sense the tingling of your mouth on mine.

Whispering Love
Did you embrace my grace to consume, to luxuriate?
I quest for those arms; and only cobwebs swathe my very being.
I plod to the river beds searching for that yawning testimony;
Where our bodies coupled as one;
To conceive what I thought was mine.

Whispering Love
Now the mocking bird laughs at my plight.
The Weeping Willows accompany my cries.
You left behind a love bird with its feathers clipped.
I try to fly to the tip of the Redwood tree;
To see your fluttering wings soar towards me.

O Whispering Love!
I cannot sleep, I cannot breathe I cannot cry no more.
Now my songs are heard by Guardian Angels,
Who keep watch over my noble spirit.
And wait to consecrate
The tiny seed in my womb, you forgot to take with you.

Thursday, July 2, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love and pain
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 04 July 2015

Love hurts and hurts endless, exactly the way it can lift one to the acme of delight! I can hear the wailing of this love sick soul! Beautifully depicted the feverish search of a lover for the lost love! A very sensual write!

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 04 July 2015

an excellent write with emotion well brought out

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Dr Antony Theodore 01 October 2015

Whispering Love Did the sweet kisses linger to wet your hungry lips? Just to quench your thirst? I’m left searching for your fingers tangled in my hair, To trace and cool the burns You left on my half opened lips. this is really beautiful Roopa. magical and so passionate, . you have really experienced love. i read it in your lines. God bless you Roopa

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Seema Jayaraman 18 September 2015

Awesome write....the love crazed search for whispering love

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Shreej K.c 23 July 2015

This is awesome! You are awesome mam :)

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Sekharan Pookkat 05 July 2015

whispering echoes in the womb and embrace it in the pool of love

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What a beautiful way of whispering a poem out and then to reveal the truth in the last line of it. This is just great. Top marks (10) .

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