Unwritten Soul


Wherever You Go


Spinning a coin
Decide you where to go
Just hold it don't let it tells
Where we should go
Spin your soul
Inside your heart
And it will tells you
What you should do

Life awakening
When your soul giving
In every touch it landing
No turning back
When we already decided
Trust your soul when it tells
Spinning inside your heart
Let it always tells you
Where we should go
We will go

If you doubt on your heart
I'll lay my trust on you
For you to believe
Wherever you go
Never alone, with you
Even the sky is still blue
And If you never knew
Thousands stars still for you
The same stars at midnight
Still shine you in daylight
Hopes around with you

Spinning time in a clock
Enough to tell you
Our life just so short
Though hardness make it feels long
So whenever you need someone
Just have in your mind...
Even the sky still blue
And If you never knew
Thousands stars still for you
The same stars at midnight
Still shine you in daylight
So i am here for you

Life made of choices and chances
Impossible if nothing hurts us,
But the healers scattered more
So whenever you have to decide
Spin your soul in your heart
Your mind will tell
Where to go
With you I'll go

And whenever you call
My soul will follow

Wherever you go
Wherever...

Submitted: Saturday, May 18, 2013
Edited: Wednesday, September 11, 2013

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Poet's Notes about The Poem

Star if you see or not in daylight, they do exist..just covered by the sun..and even sun is not even bright anymore at night, still stars are there for you...so the hope scattered for you..we just dont see it but, hopes do exist...Just trust your soul to decide whenever you have to do, to decide where you to go in your life next journey.. and same if you think no one supporting your decision, you are the one who needs to stand for yourself, and I..I will also supporting you..because only you know, what is the best for you..whenever, wherever you go..like the star hopes and i will always in the sky..be strong in this short life, with a smile we will free_Soul

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  • Bronze Star - 6,930 Points Ramesh Rai (7/7/2013 1:12:00 AM)

    If you doubt on your heart
    I'll lay my trust on you
    For you to believe
    Wherever you go
    Never alone, with you
    Even the sky is still blue
    And If you never knew
    Thousands stars still for you
    The same stars at midnight
    Still shine you in daylight
    Hopes around with you
    beautiful write (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Jinal Oswal (6/12/2013 2:23:00 AM)

    It is beautiful... No one in this world will feel alone if they read this. It has a certain energy which makes us believe in ourselves and your words.. thank you for this brilliant write :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 725 Points Ken E Hall (6/1/2013 1:53:00 AM)

    No doubt you've got it the knack of explaining the soul, all heartfelt as I read your poem it seems all written in the stars and I feel better for that and thanks...regards (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 138 Points Spiritual Seeker (5/29/2013 1:11:00 AM)

    Trials and tribulations are a test of love and devotion...sweetness will flow at the end of it! Thanks for sharing soul! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 79 Points David Wood (5/25/2013 5:13:00 AM)

    A philosophical look at life, Soul. The stars are always in the sky, sometimes we don't see them but they are there, just like hope is always there. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 234 Points Shahzia Batool (5/23/2013 12:22:00 PM)

    Lucid, poetic, philosophical, showing you in the brooding moments, composed in the galloping beats of a horse' smooth ride! ! ! a beautiful poem by Soul! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 248 Points Captain Cur (5/22/2013 9:30:00 PM)

    I like the analogy that the stars are still there whether we can see them or not.
    Existence is mainly invisible, we only know what we see and our sight is very
    limited, but feelings are endless. Loved this poem, Mr. Soul. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 85 Points Danny Draper (5/20/2013 3:42:00 AM)

    There is always hope and there is always the obvious and also that present but concealed such is hope and love and trust and friendship. Good concept. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 7 Points Paul Brookes (5/19/2013 3:29:00 PM)

    Ah lets go on an adventure and find emerald seas and turquoise skies; dive for pearls in the crystal waters. Let 's travel beyond ourselves to the stars Great poem 10/10 Thanks for sharing BB : O) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 230 Points Poetheart Morgan (5/19/2013 2:03:00 PM)

    A friend as you can be our star. Near or far away, you always bring to us comfort and love. Wherever we go. Kisses Soul. Belíssimo poema! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 230 Points Nader Baheri (5/19/2013 12:29:00 PM)

    fabulous.full of hopes.

    where ever i am standing, does not matter, the sky is spread for me...
    where ever i am standing, does not matter, the earth is spread underneath my feet
    if i poor does not matte, i have a generous heart
    if i am not beautiful, no matter, i have lots of stars in the sky to share.

    bravo very nicely written~nb (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,599 Points Diane Hine (5/19/2013 5:16:00 AM)

    That's a wonderful analogy. Of course the stars are still there. Your poem shines with hope! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 717 Points Thomas A Robinson (5/19/2013 4:51:00 AM)

    The river follows the riverbed. The riverbed is made by the river.
    Which is which, is not the collected self of both the truth.
    If the river has no river bed it will wander.aimlessly.
    The river bed is flat earth without it's river. (Report) Reply

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