Where Are You? Poem by Sarah Holmes

Where Are You?



I need you right now,
But you've not there.
It makes me feel like,
You just don't care.

You said you'd be here,
Though it all.
So why are you watching,
As I fall?

I'm hurting so much,
But where are you?
I simply just don't,
have a clue.

Have you forgotten,
Who I am?
Or do you really,
Not give a damn?

Why am I doing this,
On my own?
All you have to do,
Is pick up the phone.

I just need to know,
that you are here.
To make this pain,
just disappear.

You're not though,
This much is true.
Maybe I'll give up,
On me and you?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 07 February 2012

There are so many loving souls, that are missing something here! ! Yes, you have to give up. Most of the human should have gone through this kind of situation.

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Wahab Abdul 07 February 2012

What a nice poem is it! Nice words have been used in the poem. The quality of the poem is in its flow, the texture of the poem is knitted well, the theme is fantastic, a very good image has been created.The another quality of the poem is its mystic music. It is a great poem.I like the poem; I enjoyed it while reading too. I am giving you 100/100..Keep it up. And at last I like to thank you for sharing this superb poem among us.

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