When You Smile (Ghazal) Poem by Akhtar Jawad

When You Smile (Ghazal)

Rating: 5.0


You smile sweetheart many flowers sprung,
Wordsworth and Shelley and Keats are sung.
Tide of beauty brings out many pearls,
Ugliness sweeps out like dirt and dung.
My days are yours my nights are yours,
You are a song round the clock it's sung.
I remember sweetheart a heart I had,
With your earrings something is hung.
I cannot see if your eyes are wet,
My heart with you, see never it's wrung.

Saturday, December 6, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: smile
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Is anything more beautiful in this world than a smile of someone you love?
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 07 December 2014

My days are yours my nights are yours, You are a song round the clock it's sung. What further assurance of love is needed to make your beloved smile that sweet smile! Enjoyed!

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Khalida Bano Ali 07 December 2014

I remember sweetheart a heart I had, With your earrings something is hung. Beautiful........10

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Khalida Bano Ali 07 December 2014

I remember sweetheart a heart I had, With your earrings something is hung. Beautiful........10

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Sarmad Mirza 10 December 2014

beautiful poem beautiful thinking beautiful persn

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Salini Nair 09 December 2014

beautiful, beautiful, beautiful...............................................

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Salini Nair 09 December 2014

beautiful, beautiful, beautiful...............................................

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Salini Nair 09 December 2014

beautiful, beautiful, beautiful...............................................

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 07 December 2014

Oh! this is beauty with no disguise, simple and profound as well..........amazing write......10/10

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