Ruby Mostazir

Rookie - 96 Points (dhaka)

When Dreams Shatter - Poem by Ruby Mostazir

Your hand holds her hand
Her
hands
colored by
henna &
glitter!

My empty hands seems so gloomy
When
my
dreams
break &
shatter ……..


Comments about When Dreams Shatter by Ruby Mostazir

  • Veteran Poet - 1,063 Points Kanav Justa (12/31/2013 3:37:00 AM)

    it hurts when the dream that you care for, , , is dying rite in front of your eyes, , , nice write, , (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 7,708 Points Khairul Ahsan (9/27/2013 2:38:00 PM)

    A beautiful poem! Short but eloquent. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,770 Points Heather Wilkins (9/27/2013 2:29:00 PM)

    dreams break and shatter leaving us with empty hands lovely write sad but so true (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 12 Points Farah Ilyas (5/25/2013 12:29:00 PM)

    Touching & moving poem......a journey from happiness to sadness comes in everyone's life but entertained by only few people, same happens when dreams are shattered....well pinned (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 39,733 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (5/21/2013 8:46:00 PM)

    A broken heart that shatters the dream for new dream (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Mark Money (5/21/2013 12:56:00 PM)

    I enjoyed it.....it left me wanting more....... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, May 21, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, September 10, 2013


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