Ruby Mostazir

Veteran Poet - 1,363 Points (dhaka)

A Gray Bird - Poem by Ruby Mostazir

Wedding hall lighting like a palace
Da king sits beside da queen

a gray bird sheds some tear….

Comments about A Gray Bird by Ruby Mostazir

  • Rookie - 122 Points Yash Shinde (4/8/2014 11:41:00 PM)

    ........the gay bird sheds tears..............a deep thought presented beautifully (Report) Reply

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  • Silver Star - 4,111 Points S.zaynub Kamoonpuri (12/12/2013 7:40:00 AM)

    Oh must b a lonesome bird. Wow Nice poem with deep human meanings in allusion. Take care. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,092 Points Kanav Justa (5/20/2013 3:32:00 AM)

    grey bird sheds some tear, , , a poignant write.. nicee (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,093 Points Wahab Abdul (5/18/2013 1:01:00 PM)

    the grey bird is in dejection...nicely it (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 39,822 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (5/15/2013 9:34:00 PM)

    Nature can't hide the truth so the case with us Grey bird always sheds tears to bring out the truth/deep very deep (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,730 Points Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi (5/15/2013 4:09:00 AM)

    the cries of the people beside the palatial residence..there are lots of birds too.. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 12,669 Points Anil Kumar Panda (5/12/2013 12:07:00 PM)

    nice drop.meaningful one.liked it. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, May 12, 2013

Poem Edited: Friday, September 13, 2013

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