What Would You Think? Poem by Julie Smith

What Would You Think?



Would you think he's right for me?
Treating me like he should be
Or would you think that he's all wrong?
That I should not be hanging on

He reminds me of you
And I never give my heart away until a love is true
But sometimes I wonder if he
Is really in love with me

I sometimes see your face in his
Do I love him because of this?
No, he really has my heart
I knew it from the very start

I wish he was as strong as you
Persistent, confident and true
Heart as pure as gold
When we loved each other in the days of old

He's not mine to fill your place
I'd give my life to see your face
But somehow he has made his way
Right into my heart to stay

Thursday, August 4, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love,questions,true love,uncertainty,unconditional love
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Edward Kofi Louis 04 August 2016

Love! With many questions. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 04 August 2016

just submitted my views lady

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 04 August 2016

nice one but think 4 urself the kisses one plants only u alone can assess think not of what others would think they are not at all as much as you are obsessed so reassess you have the wings of an upcoming poetess

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