What The World Would Say If It Could Talk Poem by Dave Alan Walker

What The World Would Say If It Could Talk

Rating: 4.7


Look at me
See the butterflies fly away
See the world in my eyes

See the shadows in the sky
See the fallen angels
Of a world gone by
Look into my eyes
See your life go by

See the magic in the sky
See the anger in the clouds
See the thunder
See the lightning in my eyes
See what you've done to my life

You destroyed
Everything I ever gave

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Eric Cockrell 10 October 2011

amen, sadly, amen! you nailed it, my friend!

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Jacqui Broad 11 October 2011

Thunderous writing. I could hear the lion roaring inside...

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Poetic Heir 12 October 2011

Wow. an intense, profound concept. An amazing job here. A real eye opener Thank you.

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Hosny Soliman 12 October 2011

Well done dear Dave, you are right we are destroying our world.If really it can talk it will cry and shout more than you say.Thanks for sharing.

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Akwa Chris 18 October 2011

thanks my man, your poem is impressing, very easy to the mind to say.yes man! there are destroying our world.

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Deci Hernandez 05 June 2012

Ouch. in a nice way but still- ouch. and i liked it :)

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Roshma Rodrigues 03 February 2012

A very good one....! just loved it....! tanx for encouraging me....

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Claudia Krizay 22 January 2012

A great poem, Dave, one I can relate to!

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Rizvana Parveen 18 January 2012

Good Composition...Look into my eyes See your life go by...Beautiful lines.

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Charles Darkly 13 January 2012

Fantastic poem. Rated 10.

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