What She's Trying Tosay Poem by Indira Renganathan

What She's Trying Tosay

Rating: 5.0


Her breezy flash on the neem leaves
Fascinates me
Her albedo- sheen on the green
A bewitching show enticing
Even the withered heap pale
Down the neem shining golden browny
And I see the passers by
Glowing on the street
A feel of proud complacence
Engulfs me as she falls on me too

Now a thud of a fall from the tree
A crow chick- limping
Inebriated by the golden shine
A hope? yes I hope
But an unpleasant odour too
Wafting around- a rotten pile somewhere
The golden beauty falls on that too
What hope could it be from her
Sunshine has no disparity
Even the rotten be a manure?
Or the food for the insects?
This tender morning
What she's trying to say

Tuesday, February 25, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: nature,sunshine
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Finding beauty in nature's hints is the capability of a poet's heart..The sun shines over everything without discrimination whether it is a living being or a dead one. Nature has its own purposeful reason.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 February 2020

Even the rotten be a manure? Or the food for the insects? This tender morning What she's trying to say...outstanding conceptualization. Beautiful poem.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 27 February 2020

A very deep poem liked it madam

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Dr Dillip K Swain 25 February 2020

A thought provoking poem dear madam! Though you have given enough clues, I failed to decode your last line! A wonderful poem with fabulous imagery....10/10

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Kesav Easwaran 25 February 2020

Sunshine holds no disparity. Yes. He who prevails in the sun, makes it shower shine, provides hope to one and all without disparity. Beautiful thoughts your poem reveal 10+

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