Wheeling Poem by Indira Renganathan

Wheeling

Rating: 5.0


So the Earth is wheeling on
As wheeling the sun and moon

And wheeling the Time on ages and aeons
As wheeling the life on births and deaths

And wheeling on are hope and despair
As peace and woe chasing one another

And good and bad luck are two wheels
creatures all in destiny's colours

And creatures all wheel around what
An unknown power-point, the Pivot

And we the comparted wheeling specials
On quarrels are we to spin our visuals

And we the comparted human specials
Aren't we to wheel on our sixth sense

Thursday, November 26, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: social
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 08 September 2021

Quite a perceptive write... brilliantly expressed dear madam.

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Ejaz Khan 27 November 2009

Crucified on wheel of time, the life has but to endure in order to grow, a write that incites to go deeper, good piece like always!

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Kesav Easwaran 27 November 2009

everything is on the Eternal Time Wheel! ...including the Wheel! How do you like my 'sixth sense' there? ! a good thought provoking write...10

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Kranthi Pothineni 26 November 2009

Nice and interesting composition. Lovely flow and structure. Good one.

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Ranjit Ravindran 26 November 2009

Hmm..The sixth sense... We all have it..only few respects it, though! A nice write.

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