What's Your Dream? Poem by Deependra Kumar Jha

'He replied with despondence, I wish to collect my scattered dreams love, career, family, friend Days turned slowly into years but wait doesn't seem to end' Terrific ending. Great poem.

Interesting look at how we are not who we are but what we are and how we express that. Human DOings instead of human BEings! ! Nice write.10

And there lies the beauty of life, dear friend. A very well penned poem vovidly depicting the dreams of people from different professions. CP

A lovely and thoughts provoking poem, which is asking some serious questions?

such a meaningful poem....well done.....

So nice. Gives me a new question about this life. What's your dream? I wish you will make a better poem

dreams and their various facets..well described through various sets of eyes

dreams has no borders, its like open space no end, no one can stop us to dream but we should work hard to make our dream become true

“What’s your dream? ” is life it self…we are all dreamers otherwise life wouldn’t be a reality in us. Your poem is a reminder for all of us, which we have to dream. However, we must as well realize that dreaming demands sweat and tears to achieve what we dream. And of course it is a lesson that all of us should learn, that not all we dream are for us, therefore we have to be mature enough to accept the limit- the reality that the things are meant for us are only those we can manage and be master of it. I like it…because I am as well a dreamer.

Your poem is well penned and tells a story of the different people in society, ending with the true dream of the average man. A very good write. a 10. Your friend Lynn