Weigh Loss Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Weigh Loss

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So long with cheers
Weigh loss may be no fear
It shall not shed even ounce
Little inclusion of worry can take chance

So long you smile
Live happily meanwhile
And trust all with innocence
It has no ground to gain at once

I gain more
When try to explore
The trick misfires
As happiness infiltrates

Stress only can create mess
As so many things are to be faced
Stitch one point and find twelve another
That shall really make you to bother

Have good and beautiful wife
You will have charm in life
But just one bad thought
May make you to fight

Same way with woman too
Weight loss can be reason true
The mind may invite jealousy
The weight loss might have taken place already

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« Delete » catherine lajul Wonderful analysis!

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pallavi sharma why outer beaty is given so much importance than the inner

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Beautiful Shaiyan M.FLess than a minute ago Very beautifully written. Love Comment

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So long with cheers Weigh loss may be no fear

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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