We Can Effort But Not Control Result Poem by Soumita Sarkar

We Can Effort But Not Control Result

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Marriage is an acceptable
way to mate as said by sages
Its our norms as society set
All follow it and we become bait

One more obligation arise
To create and procreate
To see the race divide
To leave a replicate
After our silent retreat

Here some cases we forget
If God has written our fate
Fine adorned and straight
WHY....?
Some delay in their search
Start early but meet late
Few date but never wed
Few wed but can't consummate
Those who live together
Never bother to have kid
Many want to don parenthood
But their destiny don't suit

All such if's and but's
Kill the joy and sucks
Life has many ways where
we can aspire, work and cheer
Yet its filled with missions
that are beyond our vision
We can toil and effort, but
To control result will be a defeat

Copyright @poet 2 February 2022

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Soumita Sarkar 02 February 2022

Thanks Grammar Police....Poetry is beyond grammar rules. Thanks.

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Grammar Police 01 February 2022

No, we can't effort. Nobody can effort. Effort is not a verb. It is a noun.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 01 February 2022

Life has many ways where we can aspire, work and cheer Yet its filled with missions that are beyond our vision.....extremely well expressed. A beautiful poem on colors of life.5 stars.

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Soumita Sarkar 02 February 2022

Thanks Sir. Dilip Sir

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