Watching You Fall Poem by Lyn Paul
Watching You Fall
Hurting so hard
My door is open
Your heart is not
Let me in
Your pain is spreading
It's threatening LIFE
It's GOT to STOP
Hard it may be
For YOU
But so much harder
For those knocking
Just watching
Feeling Helpless
Only wanting to heal
The pain you are feeling
The pain
SO MANY feel
Thinking
NO hope
But HOPE
Will always SHINE
IF....
YOU... just let it in
PLEASE
Copyright Reserved May 2014
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Oh Lyn....this is written so well. A heart wrenching piece....I love your work. Love Roobs xxx
So very hard to watch a loved one fall....expressed perfectly here....with love. Excellent write, Lyn....and so strongly felt. Thank you....
so warm and compelling write. so hard to watch one fall. nice
I can feel the frustration you feel and the desire to help. A strong poem of hope Lyn.
The poem is Lyn Paul brand... so tender...the feeling heart and the open door... a selfless offer till the final upper-case PLEASE....so earnest and humane! ! ! Nice Lyn! ! !
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I would like to translate this poem
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