hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 65,768 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Watch It Happily - Poem by hasmukh amathalal

I wished it to happen
Not all of sudden
But on notes
Passionately to relate

Yes it was desire
So much scope to admire
As you stood different
Very much active at present

You were holding back
That beautiful smile on jack
I wondered what use it had!
You were really confused lad

You have identity
That has been blessed by almighty
Enjoy it independently
And think of it suitably

You certainly present real earth
With full of love and warmth
You are embodiment of love
I hold views and believe

You may have some wishes
Let that find fine finish
I can only stand at distance
Watch it happily by chance


Comments about Watch It Happily by hasmukh amathalal

  • Gold Star - 65,768 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/14/2013 8:34:00 PM)

    Good read. darran hardwick18 minutes ago Very enjoyable poem to read. Just one thing I noticed, a typo in the title word Happlily should read happily. Well done. D.H. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 65,768 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/14/2013 8:33:00 PM)

    random review Chloe MoonLess than a minute ago slightly confusing, but waltzy and fun to read (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 65,768 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/14/2013 6:37:00 AM)

    I wished it to happen
    Not all of sudden (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, October 14, 2013

Poem Edited: Friday, October 25, 2013


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