hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 37,749 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Watch It Happily - Poem by hasmukh amathalal

I wished it to happen
Not all of sudden
But on notes
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Comments about Watch It Happily by hasmukh amathalal

  • Gold Star - 37,749 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/14/2013 8:34:00 PM)

    Good read. darran hardwick18 minutes ago Very enjoyable poem to read. Just one thing I noticed, a typo in the title word Happlily should read happily. Well done. D.H. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 37,749 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/14/2013 8:33:00 PM)

    random review Chloe MoonLess than a minute ago slightly confusing, but waltzy and fun to read (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 37,749 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/14/2013 6:37:00 AM)

    I wished it to happen
    Not all of sudden (Report) Reply








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