Warning! Poem by Geetha Jayakumar

Warning!

Rating: 5.0


On a bright sunny day
With the light wind flowing
A Cutie white cloud of peace
Peeked from the sky to play
With the wind
And that Carried her away
Too far
That landed them in nowheres land
Down is the hill
Top is the bright sun shine falling on
Peak of the hill.

All of a sudden
Darkness gripped her way
And a storm of silence could be heard
She saw that she was surrounded
By black clouds from all sides of rain
Which were ready to pour out angrily on her
It seemed like tiger ready for an attack.
With dagger in hand
To pounce on her to kill.

Meekly stood the cutie cloud
Watching and
Remembered her mothers warning
Not to cross the border line
Which she crossed playfully
All of a sudden
The swirling wind dispersed
Away the black clouds
Surrounding her
And she was given a way
To fly away.
She flew away so fast as she was lighter than air
That leaving all the black clouds at dismay.

She reached reached on her mammas lap
And cried to her heart full.
Mamma said
Be careful next time
Don't get carried away by the wind!


©ALL RIGHTS RESERVED BY GEETHA JAYAKUMAR 2014
© 2014.

Geetha Jayakumar.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aftab Alam Khursheed 20 August 2013

metaphorically well arranged poem that give a shepherd call to all before fall nice and lovely poem Jaya

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Dave Walker 20 August 2013

We must always be careful, a great poem.

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Ovi Odiete 20 July 2015

Tells a tale so enthralling.....

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David Wood 21 August 2013

Our dreams can be carried on a cloud by the wind.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 21 August 2013

Reading this poem makes me wish to fly away with the winds like that white cloud defying mamma's warning!

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Yasmin Khan 20 August 2013

It's a charming fairy tale with a message. The story is constructed and narrated very well.

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Shahzia Batool 20 August 2013

very symbolic write Geetha, and very sound too! ! !

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