War Poem by Melissa L. Pelletier

War

Rating: 5.0


Thunder rolls in the distance
like drums of a heartbeat
stomping through the veins of
humanity

Fires of ignorance smolder
across oceans of contempt
Babies cry sorrows of the forgotten
beneath footsteps of elite

The sun does not shine today
we have been warned before
too much blood spilled on
her lovely face

Her children have not learned
from past mistakes
fathers killing mother's son
breeding everlasting hate.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Delphi Arbor 08 April 2009

makes me feel mad in the good way

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Killing Hope 09 April 2009

Good poem, with a thought.

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Jerry Hughes 25 December 2009

Excellent Mel, it's a pity so few feel as (we) do about the futility of war, and the bastards who promote it. With respect, Jerry

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Eyan Desir 10 July 2009

Beautifully written....Melissa

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John Johnson 20 April 2009

I really enjoyed this one

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Bob Gibson 19 April 2009

fathers killing mother's son breeding everlasting hate. A great ending to a sad poem, will they ever learn?

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 12 April 2009

great poem.. it makes u think nice job!

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