Addiction Poem by Melissa L. Pelletier

Addiction

Rating: 4.9


Plant her life in a window box
and let the roots look for a way
leaves and flowers reach up
to the sun, drown in a thick and
deceiving shallow grave
tape around her mouth
she cannot speak
poisonous words she swallowed
no one will hear
murky parts of who she loved
washed her memories away
thoughts of tomorrow
bleed her heart strings
like an old weeping mandolin.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
LOVEFOOL Aka 08 April 2009

Very unnerving and dark good write 10++

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Dr.subhendu Kar 12 July 2009

eaves and flowers reach up to the sun, drown in a thick and deceiving shallow grave tape around her mouth.......................wondeful write by imagery with imagery,10+++, thanks for sharing

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Bob Gibson 25 May 2009

I'd love to be in your window box, when my time is done the chemicals of my metabolism, we will feel as one from bud to gestation, watch for me my dear American rose, that bloom maybe I, I fear!

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Louis Rams 20 April 2009

when a life is planted in the ground there are no words too be found. another good write! a ten

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William Stoneberger 17 April 2009

very nice imagery...enjoyed it even tho it is a bit disturbing...sometimes the best poems are...

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Killing Hope 09 April 2009

Great dark write,10.

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