Kat Smith

Rookie - 90 Points (it would have been Wednesday but Wednesday was cancelled due to a scheduling error / night vale)

Walls - Poem by Kat Smith

The walls
I built them
still standing tall and mighty
it used to be only music that could penetrate the walls
only words of those who shared in my pain
you
damn you
you cracked these walls
you
the first
to demolish these walls
you
let the light seep through these walls
you
not me
i patched up these walls
after you left and gave up on these walls
as i run my hands along these walls
cold
dank
wet
like a sub-basement
these walls
i often wonder of the light that peered through these walls
you
the last
to touch these walls
lay a finger down and scratch
these walls
NEVER AGAIN WILL YOU FORCE ME TOO SEE
all the light that was wasted on me

wont you come break my walls again?
beat them down
wear them thin
wont you come scratch and tear at these walls
how i long for the light
to see my walls fall again
please come
tear down my walls again


Poet's Notes about The Poem

this was written for a boy who hates me now
but didn't long enough for me to fall for him
he was the only on i was willing to let in.
i will only call him (for his sake not mine) by the first letter of his first name. 's'
s, if you reading this well, yes your not hallucinating this poem was written for and about you. so please, help me tear down my walls.-k

Comments about Walls by Kat Smith

  • Gold Star - 15,369 Points John Westlake (4/26/2014 8:47:00 AM)

    Very powerful this is. I can relate to this one. Not all walls stand forever however. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 0 Points Dipy Hermonite (10/4/2013 1:32:00 AM)

    I Like the poem Kitty. Only never build any walls ever again. Articulated very well. Have rated your poem.

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  • Gold Star - 7,853 Points Bri Edwards (9/27/2013 2:21:00 PM)

    dank is almost the same as wet. but ok.

    lay a finger down and scratch
    these walls....your meaning is unclear to me. whose finger? yours or the other person's?

    there seems to be some (intended) indecision in this person's mind. interesting. and so human. i score it a good; maybe it's better. thanks for sharing. :) good luck with the walls. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 21 Points Chris Nasiyaya (8/26/2013 2:36:00 AM)

    very touching.I can feel your pain (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 115 Points Mehri Mehraban (8/12/2013 4:12:00 PM)

    I see a great future For you as a poet. You're really talented, . Continue (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sesan Falade (8/3/2013 1:02:00 PM)

    this is nice! its touching! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 31,578 Points Gajanan Mishra (8/3/2013 11:55:00 AM)

    please come to tear down my walls, good write, go on writing. thanks.
    I inviteyou to read my poems and comment. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, August 3, 2013

Poem Edited: Monday, August 19, 2013


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