Walls Poem by Vinod Kumar U K

Walls

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</>I am walking in the street
It was early morning
Both sides are huge walls
They brushed it as white
as much as their clothes
I heard the crying noise
I cant see anything inside
The walls are too high
I stand at the gate
They shouted at me
Go away from here
All are safe and secured
Inside the sacred white wall
My legs lead me away
But the walls was never ended
Only the colour changed
They said the sacred red wall
But the inmates are crying
They also shouted at me
clear the permisses soon
All are wisely protected
My legs lead me away
But the wall never changed
Only the colour changed
There also I heard the noise
Crying inside the green wall
But they push me and shouted
Do not stay the place
All are safe and secured
At last I realised the truth
All are slavers inside
The several coloured walls
I hold my hands in the sky
To pray my beloved god
Abird flew over my head
Singing her freedom song
And blessing me too!
Reached the destination
Without the wall and border

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fiona Davidson 06 December 2008

Well written Vinoduk...thanks for sharing this...

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Adeline Foster 27 July 2011

What a tenderly compassionate poem. Yes, the world lives within walls. Adeline

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Rachel Butler 22 September 2009

All are safe and secured At last I realised the truth All are slavers inside Rachel Ann Butler

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Ency Bearis 20 December 2008

great narrative poem..interesting... Ency Bearis

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Marria Attar 17 December 2008

Very interesting piece..Great Work!

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 07 December 2008

Mind imprisoned in dogma's wall Which is taller than tallest wall No wonder human race is rushing towards disaster's nigra fall Good work.

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Vinod Kumar U K

Vinod Kumar U K

kannur-kerala-India
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