Devil Poem by Vinod Kumar U K

Devil

Rating: 4.9


</>Take the Beautiful sky and earth
I don`t want
Stay in the Beautiful Worship places
I don`t want
Enjoy the Devotional songs
I don`t wan`t
Receive the day flower and night candles
I don`t want
Hear the Beautiful bird songs
I don`t want
I want only a small place
In the conjusted human heart
And all buried place darks
And ugly garbage mountains
And hear ear breaking noise
And view eye breaking blasts.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Danny Archer 20 December 2008

really nice profound idea: D

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 25 December 2008

I only want a simple thing to live life with peace and zing........... Good work................

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Kesav Easwaran 27 December 2008

your last line tells it all... tells why life is that bad aound us here...a line 'blasting out' heavily on dark minds...good write good concern yours, Vinod...10

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Whitney Nicole Albright* 31 December 2008

This is great, vinoduk. I feel the same way. Great write thanks for sharing.10.

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Subbaraman N V 04 January 2009

There is no need to feel miserable! A nice creation!

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Adeline Foster 18 July 2011

Could this be a poem to the Biblical dragon? If so, he does not want a little place; he wants it all. He is merely working behind the scenes. Why do you think the world is in such chaos? The real reason for my query is the sixth line, is there not a problem? I am not aware of such a word. Also, perhaps you meant these lines to read ‘want it’. Adeline

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 13 October 2010

‘And view eye breaking blasts. ‘~ Uncommon sensing excellent …flavor and texture is novel and noble … thanks for sharing Hon’ble Poet Vinod-ji Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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Linda Hepner 18 August 2010

I don't want... how many times we all say that to ourselves... rejecting the goodness and wishing for violence. You got it, Kumar, there's the devil in us.

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Shashendra Amalshan 05 July 2009

well this is a nice one indeed sir.. very creative, i looked at the title and expected some thing else, then i found this one..the theme expressed in a very unique and different manner sir! ! ! good one10++ with love shan

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Surya . 18 June 2009

vow! what a great poem.great idea expressed in huge emotion.love this poem voted 10 surya

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