Birds In The Battle Field Poem by Vinod Kumar U K

V illains in the war i ndulge in killing innocents n ot knowing that o n the other side d ear little creatures u nknown to human care k illed as too collateral!

A very authentic ending.....the way poetry should be.

Very powerful and evocative.The pathos of the last stanza resonates with this reader. 10 for you. Warm regards, Sandra

vivid poignant and touching I like this a lot. a very nice piece great writing. a 10

i can imagine the scene..awesome writing ^-^

Little birds are weeping. good

This is a very good poem Vinod - you have captured the essence of war quite succinctly. It has the quiet surety of a Rupert Brooke - who is, as you may well know, one of the most respected of 'War poets.' Please have a read of my 'Running for Cover' and give me your opinion. Many thanks and well done! Kevin

Voise of Ambulance Noise of crowd `n` cry Guns and tons of memories........Well written.The Kharasch Effect of representing war crimes considered to be fair..

The panick, the sadness, the desolation. I hear it all in this poem. Such over whelming sadness. thank you for inviting me to read your poetry. I am new here. I will share my own in time.

This is rather good and I appreciate the attention to spelling and grammatical structure. Something that many of your countrymen ignore. May I point out that 'voice' has a 'c' and I think you may have meant 'shower of missiles’. Please read mine - Time For Another - Adeline