Voyage Poem by Unwritten Soul
Voyage
I did not change, I'm just grown.
I did not lost my past, i only adding present my new one.
I'm in charge for my life revolution,
But im not responsible for others' doubt.
My mind speaks for whom understand
The rest may say I'm just mumbling
Originally it was only one part, second part was added which is my short thought that I wrote yesterday, the day before.
I liked this, the truth of integrity, belief in the life path chosen. It reminds me of a quote I think I can remember correctly. " This above all else, to thy own soul be true, and it must follow, as the night the day, thou canst then be false to no man." The term man is no longer politically correct, sadly I think integrity is often no longer politically correct.
Yiyan, i appreciate your kind words, its warming..thank you my friend. Happy new year
Terrific verse, Soul. The last two lines especially highlight the condition of the writer, the philosopher, the artist. Often those capable of truly hearing the meaning behind the words are limited to numbers of all too few. Brilliant verse!
Never saying bad words to my humble work. thats soo kind and nice of u MJ
Your travels have been sound not changing in aging. Wisdom has been with you.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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5/6/2024 11:33:09 PM # 1.0.0.1119
A difference between changing and growing is discussed. A poem of an individual being, a living one, I should say. Otherwise or in other aspects, is there a change... in this tiny dot or in this huge universe. Let me think :)
Hi Ali, beautiful thought....any addition after what you think