Walking Through The Rain Poem by Unwritten Soul
Walking Through The Rain
Once in our lifetime
will go through a narrow road
where there's nobody around
We just walking all alone
Carrying attached burden
And behind, chased by a storm
Will the soul safely reach home?
Left and right, nothing around
keep walking in a small road
Wind run chasing this feet
Bringing sand to my eyes
A bit hurt, force to tears
dropped, flew, dried still fears
Keep walking the storm just near
Wind swirl and touch the trees
The weak leaves falling down
Riding this feeling we cant help
After carrying all blurry years
The future seems like a smear
But the storm keep coming near
Too close to breaks and clear
I still walking ahead with hopes
There's nothing around to hold
The grey conquer half of the blue sky
While the sun gone leaving without light
Keep walking, keep moving, it's alright
Even the clouds shades my shadow
We left the past, i wont undo
When the rain pour on me
Finally i know the storm caught my body
Still I walking, keep walking even a bit slowly
Stuck in heaviness, waking, standing and walking again
The storm push me down like the weak leaves falling down
Wake up and walking once again, nothing to hold, all by my own
Thunder shouting to scare but I'm too tired to keep afraid
No choice only walking, so I'll be brave for a change
Through this heavy rain
Keep walking to keep moving
Even it was pain with burden
For days and years to come,
I making decision through this rain
For life and future days still remain
Don't want spent entire life with all constrains
A Change for a chance,
So i took this chance to change
For next change of life chance
For always i trust my believe for a chance
The reason why i keep walking through the heavy rain
Cause i know there's always something i will gain at the end
A future with a rainbow will prove there's a chance and change
Cause I know the sun will rise and shine again
So i have made a decision through the rain
Even though i know storm will appear again
I will keep walking and stand again
This time i learn and use my brain
hey lil soul, a touching write, friends unite in storms of life, lil bro-G.G.
This is a lovly poem that carries a message of hope it gives encouragment and has a way of capturing the mind of the reader...NICE POEM
An amazing poem truly amazing thankyou for Your comments on my poem.
For always i trust my believe for a chance The reason why i keep walking through the heavy rain Cause i know there's always something i will gain at the end A future with a rainbow will prove there's a chance and change Cause I know the sun will rise and shine again So i have made a decision through the rain Even though i know storm will appear again I will keep walking and stand again. .. loved these lines. This poem brings a great challenge in life to sustain. Astutely and hauntingly presented. Thank u dear Soul for posting this gem.
Beautifully Done! ! ! And So Well Put! ! ! Such Moving Imagery! ! ! Very Heart Touching! ! ! Thank You So Much For Sharing This! ! ! Saved To Favorites! ! ! 10S!
Wet! ! But still moving on with the muse of hope. Nice piece of work.
Composed with unique style and distinguished by much wisdom, this strongly inspirational piece certainly delivers the poetic goods. Outstanding, Soul!
Kudos! What perfect start to a poem. We rarely come across such good lines.................... Once in our lifetime will go through a narrow road where there's nobody around We just walking all alone Amazing simply superb poem. great going... carry on. Hope very soon you will laurels for your poems.... High Five to the poet with perfect rating 10++++++
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4/25/2024 11:32:30 PM # 1.0.0.1119
Beautiful message is conveyed. I truly experienced walking on the narrow road alone finding something great even inspite of hardships and terrible thunderstorms. When once I reached the last stanza, I found the confidence to lead life facing all challenges.Great work. I give full 10 Marks for this deeply philosophical poem.