Unwantede Poem by kibrom habtu

Unwantede

Rating: 4.8


breathing the cold air
out there leaving me lonely seems not fair
feeling thhe cold on my skin lair
but people are calling me a layer
i wanna disappear and fulfil my disiere

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Selam G/medhin 06 July 2011

Of all your poems, this is the one that expresses the courage that was inside you for a long time waiting to come out. I guess you have to go and fulfill your desire! A very inspirational poem.

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Malaya Roses 22 January 2011

I read the poet message and i understand it well.... don't care if people call you a liar but don't disappear because of them! ! ! Fight back and stand for your inner voice! ! !

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 August 2010

but people are calling me a layer i wanna disappear and fulfil my disiere, , nice poem dear.. i liked it...10 change.. wantede.. to wanted... desiere to desire....thhe to the... rest all fine

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