kibrom habtu

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  • Francis Kokutse (8/23/2011 3:56:00 AM)

    Well the reader an insight to your state of mind. Nice one.

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  • Leonard Dabydeen (12/6/2010 1:13:00 AM)

    inch by inch by inch and you measure life with textured imagery. Indeed a good write.Thanks for sharing.

  • Deogracias Bafuta Elomba Deogracias Bafuta Elomba (12/4/2010 2:08:00 PM)

    I have appreciated the way you've started to write the first line of your poem it sounds beautiful

Sue My Heart

Beneath the somber deeds of thought
I obstinated my self and vend my heart
Before my hands reached to you in the night to call
My eyes saw thy serene joy emptying my soul
My ears heard thy sweet judgment provoking the pieces of my heart….unbending
My knees felt the long distance while the grievous justice remains forgotten
And I sat
Am I to thee a fortunate lover?
Though I was caught by love and I went undercover

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