Treasure Island

kibrom habtu

(ethiopia)

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  • Francis Kokutse (8/23/2011 3:56:00 AM)

    Well composed...gives the reader an insight to your state of mind. Nice one.

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  • Leonard Dabydeen (12/6/2010 1:13:00 AM)

    inch by inch by inch and you measure life with textured imagery. Indeed a good write.Thanks for sharing.
    Blessings.

  • Deogracias Bafuta Elomba (12/4/2010 2:08:00 PM)

    I have appreciated the way you've started to write the first line of your poem it sounds beautiful

Unwantede

breathing the cold air
out there leaving me lonely seems not fair
feeling thhe cold on my skin lair
but people are calling me a layer
i wanna disappear and fulfil my disiere

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