kibrom habtu

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  • Francis Kokutse (8/23/2011 3:56:00 AM)

    Well the reader an insight to your state of mind. Nice one.

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  • Leonard Dabydeen Leonard Dabydeen (12/6/2010 1:13:00 AM)

    inch by inch by inch and you measure life with textured imagery. Indeed a good write.Thanks for sharing.

  • Deogracias Bafuta Elomba Deogracias Bafuta Elomba (12/4/2010 2:08:00 PM)

    I have appreciated the way you've started to write the first line of your poem it sounds beautiful

The Moon Is Blind

i thought she was the the light of the dark that guide me of this nature,
i thought z nature was z reflection of heaven, never expected z dark side zat mad me suffer,
i thought she was z one for me to be strong
zat i tasted the sweetness with my tongue
i thought the moon has smiles
zat she shines for miles
i thought z moon was mine zat showed her behind
and now the moon is blind

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