! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! * Untold Grip Of Sorrow*! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Poem by Dr subhendu kar

! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! * Untold Grip Of Sorrow*! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Rating: 5.0


skin seems roasted by scorching rays
sky is burning by heat of summer
sultry weather remembers autumn’s flow
anger never reels through by fear of love.

softness mellows by sweet feeling
where is smile latching on into hide?
oh emotion be cup of anger retreating
silence miffed yet untold by grip of sorrow

night still seems resilient by tear as dew
heart loses its rhythm riling upon wisdom
abstruse stillness redeems from penitence
as the reality insists upon truth of reason

Sorrow redounds deep in darkness in furrows
Humor blurs in dearth of rippling smiles
Sadness rides over the glow of ingenuity
Do you ever measure the distance of love?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Carl Harris 16 June 2009

This is a well written poem, Dr. Kar, especially for one that does not seem to have much emotion in it's lines. It seems more a scholarly dissertation on the subject rather than a poem of passion that I was expecting. Still, not to take away from this fine write, your poem was quite well expressed just the same. Carl.

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Sadness rides over the glow of ingenuity Do you ever measure the distance of love? u can't. it is immesurable... what nice idea. beautiful write and eye catching imagination and truth also.....10 love o, mother, papa do u know and papa u too. all love filled poems

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Lynda Robson 19 June 2009

A beautifully written poem Dr, how indeed can you measure the distance of love? A 10 for this Lynda xx

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Christina Phan 01 July 2009

A fanastic poem How do you mesure a distance of love? 10+ kept it Dr

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Ch J Satyananda Kumar 01 July 2009

A melancholic poem with great depths of expressions. Congrats, Dr. Kar

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Dr.subhendu Kar 29 November 2009

From : Ema B (sydney Australia; Female; 13) To : Dr.subhendu Kar Date Time : 11/29/2009 3: 31: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject : Re: hello, Dear fellow poet your poems were wonderful you are very talented I enjoyed reading your other poems to. I look up to you. Thank you.

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Mandara Pookal 16 November 2009

You fare extremely well in this beautiful composition. god bless you. mandara

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Shanta Majumder 23 October 2009

Sadness rides over the glow of ingenuity Do you ever measure the distance of love? ...just liked your writing...10 for these lines only

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Jimmy Reed 18 October 2009

intense passionate and atonce resigned to the fateful deception of love unfulfilled.......10

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Roy Martinez 16 October 2009

Nice and touching poem............10

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Dr subhendu kar

Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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