Unspoken Poem by ritty patnaik

Unspoken



some hopes
some heart breaks
some truth, some
unspoken lies
some light moments
some dark regrets.
in some lonely corner
of my heart,
it remains.

no one has a clue
to my souls yearning
hidden under my sighs!
all come and go
all memories tucked away
in the deep recess,
of my heart.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Raj Nandy 18 July 2009

A beautiful poem with embedded spiritual and philosophical thoughts.10! -Raj Nandy

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 04 July 2009

yes...some soft emotions, gently expressed, ...flows smoothly-this poem. thank you.

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Ejaz Khan 04 July 2009

A nice write, good flow and touching theme.

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rago rago 04 July 2009

sweet and written in gentle way............ very nice.........

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premji premji 04 July 2009

too mitti hai.... pour out, give wings to aflictions....... i like to call them: poetry.......

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