how can i explain the silence
written in the sky,
is the poetry of your eyes..
words cannot be held,
in the palmfull,
or just the waves of the sea!
so, i mention not
in my poem
your name and address.
is it possible to write
everything in love'
or life
just in a poem?
'is it possible to write everything in love' or life just in a poem? ' Soft and lovely poem with nice idea.10+
absolutely true..... loved it. the incompleteness of a poem is what tickles a complete sense in the mind of the reader, i guess. thank you.
a novel theme...some aspects of life can only be felt and not merely written about 10+
yes, some things we cannot explain or express....but with art, with words...we do our best!
I agree with you! What you say is very true! To express everything one must find the right words and then start writing a sequel in unfinished verse! 10! -Raj
you cant write it all in one poem big or small life is bigger than the verse yet, I marvel at the life of this poem terse
Very deep. I loved these lines- silence written in the sky, is the poetry of your eyes.. words cannot be held, in the palmfull, or just the waves of the sea! is it possible to write everything in love' or life just in a poem? Feels like a sufi poem. Reminded me of Kahlil Gibran
sure, words are not enough to write the feelings of nature........
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
'How could one express in words All that colours, flowers and butterflies convey There's no other better medium of communication Than silence to talk to birds, plants and nice people' Naseer