Unfinished Poem by ritty patnaik

Unfinished



little time
for unfinished work
in quick hurry
for a palmfull of breath.
give me some more time.

unfinished in my love
to hold you tight,
i will never forgive myself!
unfinished are our
heart talks
those untold moments
of surrender.

unfinished......
i cannot take back,
the tears
and sorrow,
i might have
flung on you,
promise to makeup,
in another birth
you are not ready
to understand! ....
after this,
there will be eternal bliss.

one fine day,
dont wake me up
in the morning.

i would have sold myself
to time.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ejaz Khan 09 July 2009

A beautiful write, soft and deep at the same time.

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Rakesh Bedi 09 July 2009

.....I would have sold myself to time; excellent thought, ritty! ! !

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