Universe (Haiku) Poem by Mihaela Pirjol

Universe (Haiku)



Cosmic Law Morphing
Energy—Infinity
Earth Vibrating Love

Wednesday, June 10, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: earth,energy,love,universe
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 14 June 2015

Deeply envisioned. Great write. TFs.

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M Asim Nehal 22 October 2015

Cosmic union......earth meeting sky...loved it

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Rahman Henry 01 September 2015

'Earth Vibrating Love'.... Great one! I enjoyed a lot.

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Kelly Kurt 21 August 2015

~~*~~I enjoy a good haiku. This was a great one!

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Kelly Kurt 21 August 2015

I enjoy a good haiku. This was a great one!

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Daniel Brick 26 June 2015

This is truly compressed energy. The middle line is all energy - and it's a huge reservoir of energy tapping into infinity, fueling two big changes - First the universe shifts in its essential nature and the new universe is a world emanating the power of love instead emanating the love of power. Your haiku accomplishes in a framework of cosmology what I did with mythology in the poem about WAITING FOR THE NON RETURN. WOW! With both science and myth causing cosmic change, E-R-O-S will triumph.

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