Under The Exotic Tree Poem by Mihaela Pirjol
Under The Exotic Tree
There...under the exotic tree,
The candid child in us at play:
I saw the little boy in thee,
In woods, with joy running that day;
Our hands softly touching a leaf green,
In hearts, rosy love blooming unseen.
'I've never got lost in forest, when I was a boy! '
Thou said, whilst thyself losing in me...
That moment, we embraced in glances coy,
As the light of love was there to see;
And through that journey of the mind,
Our hearts encountered in Sublime!
They were wandering amongst the trees,
And singing birds, and butterflies;
And they were light, and pure, and free;
Happily, they vanished in the skies...
The little boy, hand-in-hand with tiny me:
There...under the exotic tree!
This is the same theme as my FIRST KISS FOR K. W. But your poem is laced in poetic diction and rhythms and a rhyme scheme which I would have missed if your reader in Brazil had not highlighted it. The things you said about my poem are abundantly present here: the sweetness and charm, the clarity and simplicity. I'm going to put a copy of your poem with mine in my poetry folder. One poem with a vision of first love can be dismissed as sentimentality, BUT T-W-O P-O-E-M-S are unassailable.
======================================== ** ORIGINAL MESSAGE ******************** ======================================== From: Misha Allport To: Mihaela Pirjol Date-Time: 1/25/2014 10: 05: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: Under the Exotic Tree - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - The ababcc rhyme scheme is handled beautifully in a type of sonnet form-lovely. I hope you will continue sharing your gentle expressions. Good luck. Mishka Allport-Fortaleza, Brasil
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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5/7/2024 1:05:54 AM # 1.0.0.1119
An uplifting rhyming poem in form ab ab cc. Thrilling expression with nice penmanship. Thank u dear madam for sharing this gem.10